Help Haiti Product 1: SGA Comic

[zelempa]

I present to you this comic, drawn for winter_elf with the prompt: beers on the pier.



Title: "Mistake"
Fandom, Pairing: SGA, John/Rodney
Length: About 2 1/2 pages (all merged into one long gif)
Rating: PG. Male toplessness and kissing. (Wait, is this a warning or a promotion?)

That's one out of two help_haiti works down!

Comments

[reflectedeve.livejournal.com]

Hee, oh, very nice. :D I think my favorite bit is the almost pained expression Rodney pauses to make before kissing John. (Nice pacing, by the way.) I really like that title panel, too, and the likenesses are (as always) impressive.

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I love your art, so your thoughtful comments mean a lot to me.

And I'm especially glad the pacing works. This was originally scripted as a one-page comic, but I ended up adding a lot of panels to the original sketch because even though the joke is simple, it felt too rushed to try to cram it into one 8.5x11 page. Especially since I apparently require at least three kiss panels. :)