DS Comic: Speranza's "Interrogation," Part 5 (pp. 12, 13, 14)

[zelempa]

Story by Speranza, art by me. If you missed them, check out pp. 1-3, pp. 4-6, pp. 7-8, and pp. 9-11.

Page 12 "Enmeshed, embroiled, and deeply embarrassed."

Page 13 Fraser Sr.!

Page 14 Fraser makes a choice.

Next time: Ray! (I always miss him when he's gone for a page or two.) I might be up to the famous disco line. [ds_noticeboard xpost]

Comments

[love-jackianto.livejournal.com]

I love your comic. Your characters are always so expressive.

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's the Saturday morning cartoon influence, I think. I always have to down down the expressions I do in the thumbnails, all, "Okay, no, Ray's mouth doesn't go that wide..." (Unintentionally Dirty!)

[laurie-ky.livejournal.com]

Oh, Yay, Yay Yay!

Bob! Love the one picture where Bob's belly is featured on the side.

And more adoring Fraser fans.
Fraser did a good job of turning around his dad's words.

Are you up to allowing any icons to be made of your pics. I really love the one of Ray and Fraser standing so close, Ray realizing he's attracted to Fraser, and Fraser holding him by his wrists when Ray had gripped Fraser's shoulders. But feel free to turn me down.

And, can you link me to your actual post for help Chile? I took a look and I can't make out heads or tails how to find you in that mess.

Laurie

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Giving Bob a, let's say, more mature figure was kinda subconscious, I think - I forgot doing it, but I guess I did! I'm glad I wasn't in total Mountie uniform autopilot.

Fraser turning around Bob's words: you'll have to compliment Speranza on that - the text is all her. :) I'm doing so little editing. Almost every word of dialogue is in there, I just shorten them a little sometimes for the word bubbles. Every so often I'll cut a line so I don't have to do any extra panel, but it's pretty close.

Sure, you can icon the pics, no prob. Just credit me where appropriate. (You can put a little line of text in the icon area, right?)

Hmm, try the help chile post now. I linked the reply-to my comment.

[laurie-ky.livejournal.com]

I made the icon, pretty much like monkeys jumping on a keyboard, but it worked.

I did a rec for you on my lj. http://laurie-ky.livejournal.com/91329.html

And I'm going to your help chile post. We need to talk.

Laurie

[everysecondtues.livejournal.com]

This is totally awesome.

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[plotbunniofdoom]

Oh, I love Fraser Sr!

[zelempa.livejournal.com]

Awesome! :)