on 2008-10-16 12:44 am (UTC)
In a prior draft of the story, there was more of Commander Ayal's reaction to Keia, which was basically: he understood her impulse to violence; he agreed with her assessment that Rienn was probably guilty; but he still disapproved of turning on a sister-at-arms prior to the workings of justice. And in front of outsiders, no less. So, yeah.
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