I found this story by random surfing, so have a random comment!
I really liked how you worked with the time-constraint, and the whole thing was packed full of amusingly-annoyed Rodney! :)
My two favourite lines were:
"You never asked," said Radek. "Also you never listened. Also when I tried to tell you any detail of my personal life, you made vomiting sounds."
"True," Rodney agreed; and then realized his mistake, and eyed Sheppard suspciously. "Are you making fun of me?" "Yep," said Sheppard. "I'll tell him you said 'hey.'"
and I think they were pure genius and in-character wonderfully :)
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
ninetydegrees
no subject
on 2009-01-14 11:34 pm (UTC)I really liked how you worked with the time-constraint, and the whole thing was packed full of amusingly-annoyed Rodney! :)
My two favourite lines were:
"You never asked," said Radek. "Also you never listened. Also when I tried to tell you any detail of my personal life, you made vomiting sounds."
"True," Rodney agreed; and then realized his mistake, and eyed Sheppard suspciously. "Are you making fun of me?"
"Yep," said Sheppard. "I'll tell him you said 'hey.'"
and I think they were pure genius and in-character wonderfully :)