Jan. 3rd, 2008

On betaing

Jan. 3rd, 2008 09:26 am
zelempa: zelempa classic (Default)
The good news is I made a New Year's resolution to write more this year, and, in that spirit, I signed up for [livejournal.com profile] 12in2008, so theoretically, you can expect 12 stories from me this year, a significant improvement from my previous 2007 and 2006 records of 2 and like a half, respectively. And indeed, I have in the last few days been making some progress. The bad news is that my family is having their Christmas this weekend, so you won't get to see any of it for awhile longer. Ha!

I've rhapsodied on the subject of my amazing beta before (she FIXED MY PRISONFIC! She SAVED CHRISTMAS), and the effect of having someone to roll around ideas with, to tell you what doesn't work, to help tweak your jokes, and to find those pesky "and and"s (I write in notepad, okay? I need that) cannot be overstated.

In [livejournal.com profile] mcshep_match I beta'd some people's stuff, and I loved it, so I just wanted to tell you, dear Reader (all one of you), that I'm a willing and ready volunteer if you want a new pair of eyes on an SGA, TS or DS story sometime. (Or another show that I know? Just ask.) I should warn you that classically the effect of my critique has been pretty much suggesting that people cut things, which I know has got to be unsatisfying. Still, I love tossing around ideas, thinking about emotional arcs, dissecting scenes to see how they tick, and brainstorming ways to make a line or an exchange funnier or more effective, and I know where commas are supposed to go (even if I don't always follow my own rules).

On the flip side, if you happen to be someone who knows what plot things happened in various episodes of SGA and how the technology works, I could really use you. That kind of stuff just falls out of my head. I'm sure I'm committing sins against canon left and right.

Anyway, just letting you know that, like Blair for Jim, I'm HERE FOR YOU. If you NEED ME. In your apartment. Calling from inside the house!
zelempa: zelempa classic (Default)
As proof that I am indeed writing I offer this short scene cut from my current TS WIP. Things have veered in another direction and there's no way I could possibly put it back even if I wanted to, or at least, it would be very ill-advised. So it's going here! It requires no context and won't spoil you as it has next to nothing to do with the plot of the surrounding story (which probably explains why it had to be cut).

Title: Safety Risk
Words: 160

Tents are excellent for sex. )

Profile

zelempa: zelempa classic (Default)
zelempa

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Aug. 15th, 2025 06:14 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios

Style Credit