Ah, I forgot to reread the flashfiction! There's always something. Oh well, I'm committed now.

Yeah! I mean my goal is totally to try to create the feeling that you're seeing the guys playing out the story (admittedly as limited by my skill with the pen). My only concern is if it's going to be possible to go back and read the story and not see the guys as cartoons. But I suppose you can read Hamlet and not always think about Mel Gibson.

Anyway, yah! I'm glad you like it!