Oh, very sweet! I love how what's basically a rather silly and cliche idea ("Planet of the Gays") is actually handled in an unexpectedly realistic and even painful way (with the twist near the end) and how that reflects John and Rodney's situation back on Atlantis. You also did a nice job with Rodney's cluelessness, including the way that his feelings towards the two women transition slowly from being attracted to them, to simply being friends with them, with Rodney apparently being none the wiser. Very enjoyable.