ext_42355 ([identity profile] makeanewworld.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zelempa 2008-05-31 01:06 pm (UTC)

I know nothing about blackjack, but I very much enjoyed this fic.

Blair's freakout had me in stitches in places, as did his 'Jim' fantasies (he's such a teenage girl!).

I thought Blair watching himself in horror as he gets angry at Jim offering him exactly what he wants was very realistic and in-character. As was Jim being slow to get with the program, but being totally committed (and pretty traditional about it) once he has. Very, very Jim.

I also loved Blair's letting fate decide through the cards, and trying not to influence the game in any way. It's the kind of thing he'd do.

This was heartwarming and sweet and lots of fun!

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