ext_4071 ([identity profile] laurie-ky.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zelempa 2008-05-29 03:03 am (UTC)

I loved this story and laughed at so many lines. Blair with his resigned fantasies that Jim just upended by getting with the program two years later -- no wonder Blair freaked. And what a lovely freak-out it was. And his fatalistic streak that afterward seemed ridiculous to himeself was very good. And Jim springing a diamond on Blair and Blair's mouth just going off on its own agenda, while his brain is trying to wrest control back, I loved that part too.
Good babbling and freaking and dialouge and insights into Jim's liking of the married state. They did things kind of backward -- they were married for years before having sex.

Laurie

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